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Writing for a busy reader
How people read at work, and the three questions to answer before you write a single word.
At work, few people read the way you write. You write from beginning to end; your reader skims. They see the subject line and the first line or two in an inbox preview, decide whether the message matters now, and often read the rest on a phone between meetings. Many readers never reach your final paragraph. This is not laziness: your message is competing with dozens of others. Clear business writing starts by accepting this and designing every message so that a reader who stops after the first few lines still gets what they need.
Before you write, answer three questions in a sentence each. Who is the reader, and what do they already know? What do I want them to do, think or decide after reading? What is the one thing they must not miss? If you cannot answer the second question, you are not ready to write; you may need to think, call someone or gather facts first. Writing the answers down takes a minute, and it often reveals that you were about to send a long update when the reader only needs a yes-or-no question.
Give each message one main purpose. An email that asks for budget approval, shares a project update and invites people to a social event will get a reply about whichever item is easiest to answer. If you have three purposes, send three short messages with three clear subject lines, or put the most important item first and label the others clearly. One purpose per message also makes your messages easier to find later, because the subject line can describe the whole content.
Finally, decide how much the reader needs. A common mistake is to show all your work: every step of the investigation, every option considered, every caveat. Most readers want the conclusion, the reason in a sentence or two, and what happens next. Put supporting detail lower down, in an attachment or behind a link, for those who want it. A useful test is to imagine the reader has 30 seconds in a corridor. What would you tell them? That is your message; everything else is backup.
Example: a logistics coordinator in Singapore rewrites a status email
Before: “Hi all, following our discussion last week I spoke to the warehouse team, who checked with the carrier, and it seems the container was held at the port because of a documentation issue that has now mostly been resolved, although we are still waiting for one certificate. Assuming that arrives, delivery may be possible on Thursday.” After: “Delivery is likely on Thursday 15 October, if the carrier receives one missing certificate by Tuesday. I will confirm by Tuesday at 17:00. The container was held at the port over a documentation issue, which is otherwise resolved.” The rewrite answers the reader’s real question, when the goods will arrive, in its first sentence, states the condition and promises a specific next update.
Illustrative example: the business, people and figures are fictional.Key takeaways
- Readers skim and often stop early, so the first lines must carry the message
- Before writing, answer: who is the reader, what should they do, what must they not miss
- Give each message one purpose and move supporting detail lower down or out
Exercise
Open your last ten sent emails. For each one, write a single sentence stating what you wanted the reader to do. Mark the emails where that action appears in the first two lines, and those that had more than one purpose. Rewrite the opening of the two weakest emails.
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